Introduction to an Essay

[hillsgate]

Control theories have an excellent line of decent that can be traced back to the periods of the Aristotle in which sociologists such as Durkheim and Hobbes have model for government and institutions such as the University of East London adopt to monitor students attendance through the use of identification swipe cards imbeded with micro chips.

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[tedtmc]

Control theories have an excellent line of decent (descent) that can be traced back to the periods of the Aristotle in which sociologists such as Durkheim and Hobbes have model for government and institutions such as the University of East London (to) adopt to monitor students(student or students') attendance through the use of identification swipe cards imbeded with micro chips.

Kindly review the introduction for this essay please.
Thank you.

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