TOEFL ESSAY

[bhapi]

HI, I'VE WRITTEN SO MANY TIMES A TOEFL TEST. I NEED EXCELLENT MARKS IN ALL THE SECTION TO GET THE ADMISSION I WANT IN, BUT I AM GETTING GOOD SCORE IN ALL THE AREAS, ONLY PROBLEM IS IN MY WRITING , I JUST GOT AVERAGE SCORE, HOW CAN I IMPROVE THAT.

[SoothingDave]

Try using capitalization and punctuation properly.

[5jj]

HI, I'VE WRITTEN taken SO MANY TIMES A TOEFL TEST many times . I NEED EXCELLENT MARKS IN ALL THE SECTIONs TO GET THE ADMISSION I WANT IN, BUT I AM GETTING GOOD SCOREs IN ALL THE AREAS, ONLY PROBLEM IS except IN MY WRITING , where/in which I JUST GOT an AVERAGE SCORE,. HOW CAN I IMPROVE THAT.?

Welcome to the forum, bhapi.

One thing you can do is to practise writng English correctly at all times. As SoothingDave wrote, that includes using capitalization and punctuation properly. It also means thinking carefully about what you are writing. Look at the corrections I have made in your post.

You can post samples of your writing here, Editing & Writing Topics, for comment and correction.