Re: take days off work ?
I agree with bhaisahab that there are too many "and"s in the original. I also don't see the need for the word "work". Presumably, this request is going to your employer so you could just say "I would like to take two days off - June 28th and 29th". You could even shorten it more with "I have 5 vacation days remaining and I would like to take two of them on June 28th and 29th. [The rest is fine.]"
Originally Posted by thomas615
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.