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Many thanks for your help, Richard. But I am afraid I still have some problems. Could you please answer the questions correctly? I mean I would be very flattered if you put the answers right. I respect you for you gave me some of your precious time. |
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| Actually, he was walking. More specifically, he was taking a nature walk. (By the by, instead of walking to and fro, try walking around or walking here and there.) Quote:
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| 10) needs more work 11) · The thought of the dancing daffodils gives him the same pleasure and excitement that he experienced long ago. Add ... Whenever he feels "vacant" or "pensive," the memory flashes upon "that inward eye / That is the bliss of solitude," and his heart fills with pleasure, "and dances with the daffodils." 12) Mention the two moods of the poet. ·Lonely (i.e., as a cloud) and Happy (i.e., gay). 13) How can the heart dance? Figurative meaning here. Rhythm of heatbeats; also, the idiom make your heart dance means something makes you happy; e.g., chocolate makes my heart dance. 14) Has this ever happened to you? => Your answer is fine. Quote:
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ABOUT THE POEM "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud" is an 1804 poem by William Wordsworth. It was inspired by an April 15, 1802 event in which Wordsworth and his sister, Dorothy came across a "long belt" of daffodils. It was first published in 1807, and a revised version was released in 1815. In anthologies the poem is sometimes titled "The Daffodils".The poem paints a picture of peace and tranquility. Wordsworth uses beautiful imagery to paint this picture (imagery of clouds, walks beneath trees, beside lake, etc.) (Please look at it for grammar mistakes.) => Uhm, did you actually write that? That's about all I can do for now, Asad. Good luck and all the best. |
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| 1. He was walking aimlessly here and there. (Can I also answer the question like this?) 3. They were beside the lake, under the boughs of the trees. (Is this how you want me to answer this?) They were beside a lake, under the boughs of some trees. (Can I also try this?) 5. He connects the daffodils with the stars for several reasons. First, their shape. The petals mimic a star shape. Second, their number. The stars are infinite; the daffodils are abundant. Third, their color. They're golden. Note, Galaxy is capitalized in reference to the Milky Way. (Is that how you want me to answer the question?) (Can I replace the clause “He connects the daffodils with the stars” with “He does so”?) 6. Their flow, abundance, and continuity. (Do I add this part to the answer too, or did you only write it to help me know The Milky Way?) The Milky Way is a bright line of stars stretching across the night sky. (Not their shine?) 10. (What kind of work does it need more? Please tell me.) 13. (But how do I answer it?) 15. Not really. 16. (But my question is still not answered. I asked if I could add the italicized part as well.) 17. (Not all the words are mine. You haven’t looked at the next two parts “ABOUT THE POET” and CENTRAL IDEA/MAIN THEME”.) |
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| 1 Was it aimless? 3 Both fine to me 5 a star shape- the shape of a star Yes to your question 17 If they're not your words, shouldn't you use quotation marks and indicate the source? |
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| The simple things in life can enrich our lives, as we allow them. We can enjoy natural beauty double that is by its charming sight and memory for imagination, feeling of our heart and mind with peace and pleasure. Anything good ever remains fresh, unforgettable and undying. I'd delete 'the' at the start- you're talking in general. as we allow them- if? double that- this doesnt work- how about twice/in two ways Anything good always... |
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| 1. I mean he was walking without any purpose (=aimlessly) here and there. 2. What do you mean by "a star shape"? 3. Yes, you are utterly right. Simple things in life can enrich our lives,how we allow them. We can enjoy natural beauty twice by its charming sight and memory for imagination, (the?) feeling of our heart and (a?) mind with peace and pleasure. Anything good always remains fresh, unforgettable and undying. -Like this, Richard (/Tdol)? |
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| 1 Why not use 'wandering' 2 That's the phrase you used, which I didn't like much. We can enjoy natural beauty in two ways: the charm of seeing it and as a memory??? |
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| PS the feeling in our heart(s) and mind(s) Last edited by Tdol; 23-Jan-2007 at 06:16. |
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