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Hello,
I have got a book written by Debra Philips for TOEFL preparation. In a exercise from the Writing section students must proofread some provided texts. I have done one of them but it seems that my corrections are different from the answer keys of the book. I think my corrections are ok too but I'm not sure about it. would you please take a look at my corrections and tell me your opinions regarding them?
The Original Text:
My corrections:
The Answer Key:
I have got a book written by Debra Philips for TOEFL preparation. In a exercise from the Writing section students must proofread some provided texts. I have done one of them but it seems that my corrections are different from the answer keys of the book. I think my corrections are ok too but I'm not sure about it. would you please take a look at my corrections and tell me your opinions regarding them?
The Original Text:
I understand that it seems importantly for a student to prepare early their assignments rather than procrastinate in getting assignments done. However, although I understand this clear, I always seem to wait until the finally minute to get assigning projects done. There are two reasons why I regular procrastinate on my assignments academic in spite of the fact that this is not a best way to get my work done.
My corrections:
I understand that it seems [STRIKE]importantly[/STRIKE] important for a student to prepare[STRIKE] early their[/STRIKE] his assignments early rather than procrastinate in getting assignments done. [STRIKE]However, although I understand this clear[/STRIKE] Although understanding this clearly, I always seem to wait until the [STRIKE]finally minute[/STRIKE] final minutes [STRIKE]to get assigning projects done[/STRIKE] to do the assigned projects. There are two reasons why I [STRIKE]regular[/STRIKE] regularly procrastinate [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] in my assignments academic in spite of the fact that this is not [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] the best way [STRIKE]to get my work done[/STRIKE] to do my works.
The Answer Key:
Regards.I understand that it seems [STRIKE]importantly[/STRIKE] important for [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] students to prepare [STRIKE]early their assignments[/STRIKE] their assignments early rather than procrastinate in getting assignments done. However, although I understand this [STRIKE]clear[/STRIKE] clearly, I always seem to wait until the [STRIKE]finally[/STRIKE] final minute to get [STRIKE]assigning[/STRIKE] assigned projects done. There are two reasons why I [STRIKE]regular[/STRIKE] regularly procrastinate on my [STRIKE]assignments academic[/STRIKE] academic assignments in spite of the fact that this is not [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] the best way to get my work done.