Silverobama
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- Aug 8, 2010
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- Chinese
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- China
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- China
Hi.
I wrote a short paragraph about saying goodbye to the past. My parents liked play mahjong when I was very young. At that time, they played for the whole nights and I woke up in bad dreams but I didn't see them at home. Most of the time, I was scared. I hated them. But after I grew up, starting working, I began to realize that they might not mean it. I also know that they had did their best to give me a good life. The other day I said this to my friend and all the pain went away. I wrote the following:
After so many years of inner struggling, I finally decided to let go of the past. To unfist my tight fist and release my pain, then to embrace the future.
I want to say that I was feeling innerly painful for many years. But I finally decided to let go of the past and let go of my pain, to unclench my tight fists around what happened to me in the past and to embrace the future.
Please help me with the italic sentence. I want to keep all those words but I know it's not natural.
I wrote a short paragraph about saying goodbye to the past. My parents liked play mahjong when I was very young. At that time, they played for the whole nights and I woke up in bad dreams but I didn't see them at home. Most of the time, I was scared. I hated them. But after I grew up, starting working, I began to realize that they might not mean it. I also know that they had did their best to give me a good life. The other day I said this to my friend and all the pain went away. I wrote the following:
After so many years of inner struggling, I finally decided to let go of the past. To unfist my tight fist and release my pain, then to embrace the future.
I want to say that I was feeling innerly painful for many years. But I finally decided to let go of the past and let go of my pain, to unclench my tight fists around what happened to me in the past and to embrace the future.
Please help me with the italic sentence. I want to keep all those words but I know it's not natural.