Rachel Adams
Key Member
- Joined
- Nov 4, 2018
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Georgia
- Current Location
- Georgia
I used asterisks to show which parts I am not sure about and I tried to rephrase them. I think it should be "at" not "in high school". Is "in" also correct? The parts in brackets are rephrased. Should I use "the opportunity" or "an opportunity"?
*In/at high school* (at high school) school I realised that I liked to deal with devises and (and since my parents didn't have the opportunity to send me to drawing courses to study architecture) since my parents* didn't have the opportunity to send me to drawing courses to prepare for the architecture department,* I decided that becoming a programmer was also a good option. Throughout high school and early university years I created robots but it was difficult for a girl to get such a job at that time. Most of my hobbies are related to creativity.
*In/at high school* (at high school) school I realised that I liked to deal with devises and (and since my parents didn't have the opportunity to send me to drawing courses to study architecture) since my parents* didn't have the opportunity to send me to drawing courses to prepare for the architecture department,* I decided that becoming a programmer was also a good option. Throughout high school and early university years I created robots but it was difficult for a girl to get such a job at that time. Most of my hobbies are related to creativity.