Could you please edit my cover letter?

[Golnaz.M]

Dear Hiring Manager,

My name is Golnaz xxx and this is my application for the UI Designer position at the xxx advertised on Linkedin. Reading your job posting, I found myself very suitable for this role.

I obtained my bachelor's degree in Graphic Design from the University College of Nabi Akram, Iran and my master's degree in Painting-Visual Arts from the Academy of Fine Arts of Bologna, Italy. I had the opportunity to fit into different work contexts that made me acquire more skills in graphic design and web design for almost six years.
My expert knowledge of Adobe Creative Suite (Illustrator, Photoshop, Indesign, XD), Figma, Keynote and Microsoft office will allow me to play a crucial role in implementing your design initiatives.

I consider myself dynamic, creative, accurate, and have an excellent ability to handle projects. I am always willing to learn new skills to enhance my abilities and contribute to the organization. I am a collaborative team player who is always searching for opportunities to impart valuable insights.

Please find my resume attached for your review. Thank you for your time and consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.


Your sincerely,
xxxx

 

[teechar]

Dear Hiring Manager,

My name is Golnaz xxx, and this is my application for the UI Designer position at the xxx advertised on Linkedin. Reading your job posting, I found myself very believe I am a suitable candidate for this role.

I obtained my bachelor's degree in Graphic Design from the University College of Nabi Akram, Iran in 2014, and my master's degree in Painting-Visual Arts from the Academy of Fine Arts of Bologna, Italy in 2017. I have had the opportunity to fit into work in different work contexts, and that made has enabled me to acquire more advanced skills in graphic design and web design for over almost six years.

My expert knowledge of Adobe Creative Suite (Illustrator, Photoshop, Indesign, XD), Figma, Keynote and Microsoft Office will allow me to play a crucial role in implementing your design initiatives.

I consider myself dynamic, creative, accurate, and I have an excellent ability to handle projects. I am always willing to learn new skills to enhance my abilities and contribute to the organization. I am a collaborative team player who is always searching for opportunities to impart valuable insights.

Please find my resume attached for your review. Thank you for your time and consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully, sincerely,

xxxx

 

[emsr2d2]

Note that the second "i" should be capitalised in "LinkedIn".

 

[emsr2d2]

The convention is that if you start with "Dear Sir/Madam" or (as in your case) you don't know the actual name, you should end with "Yours faithfully". If you start with an actual name, end with "Yours sincerely".

 

[Golnaz.M]

Dear Hiring Manager,

My name is Golnaz xxx, and this is my application for the UI Designer position at the xxx advertised on Linkedin. Reading your job posting, I found myself very believe I am a suitable candidate for this role.

I obtained my bachelor's degree in Graphic Design from the University College of Nabi Akram, Iran in 2014, and my master's degree in Painting-Visual Arts from the Academy of Fine Arts of Bologna, Italy in 2017. I have had the opportunity to fit into work in different work contexts, and that made has enabled me to acquire more advanced skills in graphic design and web design for over almost six years.

My expert knowledge of Adobe Creative Suite (Illustrator, Photoshop, Indesign, XD), Figma, Keynote and Microsoft Office will allow me to play a crucial role in implementing your design initiatives.

I consider myself dynamic, creative, accurate, and I have an excellent ability to handle projects. I am always willing to learn new skills to enhance my abilities and contribute to the organization. I am a collaborative team player who is always searching for opportunities to impart valuable insights.

Please find my resume attached for your review. Thank you for your time and consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully, sincerely,

xxxx

I appreciate your help so much.

 

[Golnaz.M]

The convention is that if you start with "Dear Sir/Madam" or (as in your case) you don't know the actual name, you should end with "Yours faithfully". If you start with an actual name, end with "Yours sincerely".

Thank you for the explanation.

 

[emsr2d2]

@Golnaz.M - In future, there is no need to write a new post to say "Thanks" to anyone. Simply click on "Thank", found by hovering your cursor over the "Like" button.

 

[Golnaz.M]

Hi, I changed a part of my cover letter but I'm not sure if this is correct. Could you please edit it? Thank you in advance
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I consider myself dynamic, creative, and accurate. I have an excellent ability to handle projects from research to prototyping and delivering pixel-perfect design to the developers. I have a good artistic sense which helps me to pay attention to visual elements, composition, and layout. I am always willing to learn new skills to enhance my abilities and contribute to the organization. I am a collaborative team player who is always trying to hear and implement team member's ideas, feedback, and advice.

 

[teechar]

You need members' (not member's)