Diary - A few days ago, I bought a new pair of sneakers.

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A few days ago, I bought a new pair of sneakers. Yesterday I wore them, and they caused blisters on my feet. The sneakers are mostly made of plastic so they are not as flexible as synthetic materials I used to wear. I think I will not buy plastic sneakers again.
 
A few days ago, I bought a new pair of sneakers. Yesterday I wore them, and they caused blisters on my feet. The sneakers are mostly made of plastic, so they are not as flexible as other shoes (usually made of different synthetic materials) I used to wear. I think I will not buy plastic sneakers again.
 
I have never heard of plastic sneakers before.
 
Thanks a million for that great link @Amigos4.
 
Thanks a million for that great link @Amigos4.
I was shocked, and impressed, when I saw what was being done with recycled plastic bags! I learn something new every day.
 
This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

A few days ago, I bought a new pair of sneakers. Yesterday I wore them, and they caused blisters on my feet. The sneakers are mostly made of plastic so they are not as flexible as synthetic materials I used to wear. I think I will not buy plastic sneakers again.
A few days ago, I bought a new pair of sneakers.

Yesterday I wore them,
I wore them yesterday,

and they caused blisters on my feet.
and they gave me blisters.

The sneakers are mostly made of plastic so they are not as flexible
The sneakers are made mostly of plastic, so they're not as flexible

as synthetic materials I used to wear.
as the material I usually wear.

I think I will not buy plastic sneakers again.
I probably won't buy plastic sneakers again.
 
Do you need to say on my feet?
No, you don't need to say "on my feet."
It can be confidently assumed that shoes won't give you blisters anywhere else.
It's certainly possible to say it, and no one would particularly notice it, but it certainly is not usually specified.
 
@Maybo I've been missing you. (Just between us, you're one of my favorite members. 😊)
 
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