Diary - A few days ago, I bought a pyjama which has a cooling effect.

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Maybo

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This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

A few days ago, I bought a pyjama which has a cooling effect. I'm satisfied with the product because I do feel less warm while wearing it. Sometimes at night, I wake up to hotness, but now, I had a good sleep. Also, the pyjama is so soft that makes me feel like not wearing anything. I think I will buy more in future.
 

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This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

A few days ago, I bought a pair of pyjamas which has have a cooling effect. I'm satisfied with the product them because I do feel less warm while wearing it them. Sometimes at night, I wake up to hotness hot, but now no comma here I had a good sleep well. Also, the pyjamas is are so soft that they makes make me feel like I'm not wearing anything. I think I will buy more in the future.
We don't say "a pyjama". It's "a pair of pyjamas". Consequently, all the associated verbs and pronouns need to be in the plural.
 

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Perhaps:

I used to wake up in the middle of the night hot and sweaty, but now I sleep well.
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