Diary - A few days ago, my mother watched a show about selling of castles.

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A few days ago, my mother watched a show about selling of castles. She found that many castles were very cheap, and she suggested we bought one and lived there. I objected to her because I believe we need to renovate the castle very often. Mostly importantly, I don’t know how many people has died in there. That makes me scared. However, if I were eight years old, I would probably agree with this idea.
 

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A few days ago, my mother watched a show about selling the sale of castles. She found out that many castles were are sold very cheaply, and she suggested we bought buy one and lived live there. I objected to her because I believe we would need to renovate make repairs to the castle very often. Mostly importantly, I don’t know how many people has might have died in there. That makes me scared. However, if I were eight years old, I would probably agree with this her idea.
 

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What’s the difference in meaning between “found” and “found out” in that sentence?
 

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I tend to use "found" after I've done some investigating. In this case, she simply watched a TV programme. From that programme, she found out (learned) something about castles.
 

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I might have said: "A few days ago, my mom watched a show about people selling castles and decided that she wants one."

There's a story!
 
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