Diary - It's been raining so I've been staying at home.

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This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

It's been raining so I've been staying at home. Originally, I planned to have a buffet with my family or went to theme parks to celebrate Halloween this week, but now, I don't know when I can go out. The only things I can do at home are studying, planting and cooking. However, the rainy days have made me feel lethargic. I only have half of my energy that I normally have, so I do everything slowly and keep procrastinating.
 
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It's been raining, so I've been staying at home. Originally, I planned a buffet with my family or to go to theme parks to celebrate Halloween this week, but now I don't know when I can go out. The only things I can do at home are studying, planting or cooking. However, the rainy days have made me feel lethargic. I only have half of the energy that I normally have, so I do everything slowly and keep procrastinating.

Thanks to @tedmc
 
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Tarheel
You have missed a comma.;)
 

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Where? Where did I miss a comma?
 

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After "studying".
 

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... unless you're training to be a horticulturalist. ;)
 
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