Diary - This afternoon, when I walked out of the kitchen

[Maybo]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

This afternoon, when I walked out of the kitchen, I almost slipped on the floor! My ankle twisted a bit while I was slipping so it was hurt. I‘ve had several small slips this month. Now, the big one has happened. I really need to keep the floor dry!

 

[Tarheel]

While you were walking out of the kitchen you slipped, but you didn't fall.

Simply walk slower and take shorter steps if you are going to walk on a wet floor. They are, of course, slippery when wet.

I don't recommend that you use "almost slipped" again.

 

[Maybo]

They are, of course, slippery when wet.

I noticed the floor was wet when I slipped.

 

[Tarheel]

I noticed the floor was wet when I slipped.

If you do that the other way around there should be no slipping and falling. Baby steps!

On a personal note, a few winters back the sidewalks were icy here in Charlotte. I was walking home, and I slipped a couple of times. The third time I just went right down.

 

[tedmc]

I almost slipped on the floor!

You didn't almost slip; you slipped.

My ankle twisted a bit while I was slipping so it was hurt.

I twisted my ankle and it hurt (badly).

 

[emsr2d2]

This afternoon, when as I walked out of the kitchen, I almost slipped on the wet floor! My ankle twisted a bit while I was slipping as I slipped so and [now] it was hurts. I‘ve had several small slips this month. Now no comma here I've had the a big one. has happened. I really need to keep the floor dry!