Establishing laws controlling car ownership and usage is crucial to ensuring that traffic congestion reduces.

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Establishing laws controlling car ownership and usage is crucial to ensuring that traffic congestion reduces.

1. Is it right to use the -ing verb after "to" in this case?

2. Did I reduce the relative clause "which control car ownership and car usage" well?

3. Is there any other problem with the sentence
 
If laws already exist, then you need to change establishing.
 
Is that your own sentence, hardyweineberg??
 
If laws already exist, then you need to change establishing.
The laws don't exist. I was talking about introducing a new law and I didn't want to use "introduce" twice.
 
Establishing laws controlling car ownership and usage is crucial to ensuring that traffic congestion reduces.

1. Is it right to use the -ing verb after "to" in this case?

2. Did I reduce the relative clause "which control car ownership and car usage" well?

3. Is there any other problem with the sentence

1. Both ensure and ensuring work.

2.Yes.

3. Gramnatically there is no problem with it, but in my opinion it's a very dubious proposition logically.
 
I think the most effective way of reducing traffic congestion in the urban areas is to provide a good public transportation system so that people do not have to use private transport. This has been proven in many major cities around the world.
 
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