alpacinou
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- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Her eyes searched the house, looking for him. Her mind was wrapped in a wine-induced fog. Even that couldn't stop her from thinking about John. A lust for him was growing in her gut that could easily get out of control. A voice was echoing in her head, he's married, he's married, only intensifying her desire. She shoved down the shame and the guilt swirling inside her and walked towards John who was standing in the kitchen. Leaning on the countertop, she flicked her hair behind her shoulder, showing off her cleavage. "Are you gonna peel potatoes, John?" she said, giving him a flirty smile. No sooner had she said the words that regret overcame her. Even through her drunken haze she understood how silly she must have come off.
Her eyes searched the house, looking for him. Her mind was wrapped in a wine-induced fog. Even that couldn't stop her from thinking about John. A lust for him was growing in her gut that could easily get out of control. A voice was echoing in her head, he's married, he's married, only intensifying her desire. She shoved down the shame and the guilt swirling inside her and walked towards John who was standing in the kitchen. Leaning on the countertop, she flicked her hair behind her shoulder, showing off her cleavage. "Are you gonna peel potatoes, John?" she said, giving him a flirty smile. No sooner had she said the words that regret overcame her. Even through her drunken haze she understood how silly she must have come off.