I am writing to apply for the Care Assistant position at ...

[fernasanj]

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Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to apply for the Care Assistant position at (hospital name) that I learned from reliable sources. I have extensive experience working with aged patients, which makes me the right fit for this role. I have been working as a Registered Nurse for the past 10 years at (xxxxxx Hospital). During this period, I have gained extensive experience in providing care to patients of all ages and I have built up a solid bank of skills that I believe would allow me to make a significant contribution. I am also very comfortable working independently or as part of a team.

In my current role, I work closely with the patients on things like changing beds, personal grooming etc.

I would like you to request an opportunity to discuss my skills and experience face to face, as well as to learn more about your opening.

 

[emsr2d2]

Can someone correct this letter, please?

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for the Care Assistant position at (hospital name) that I learned from reliable sources saw on/in [name of website/name of publication]. I have extensive experience working with aged elderly patients, which makes me the right a good/perfect fit for this role. I have been working as a Registered Nurse for the past 10 years at (xxxxxx Hospital). During this period, I have gained extensive experience in providing care to patients of all ages and I have built up a solid bank of skills that I believe would allow me to make a significant contribution to the Care Assistant role. I am also very equally comfortable working independently or as part of a team.

In my current role, I work closely with the patients on things like tasks such as changing beds and personal grooming etc.

I would like appreciate you to request an the opportunity to discuss my skills and experience face-to-face, as well as and to learn more about your opening the vacancy.