[Essay] I need help with descriptive paragraph

[khal]

Plz I need some idea about "City you have visited"

 

[probus]

Sorry, we can't do your homework for you.

 

[emsr2d2]

[STRIKE]Plz[/STRIKE] This is not a word. The word is "please".

I need some ideas for a descriptive paragraph about "A city/Cities you have visited".

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