[Grammar] Mark aimed the special light directly into the eyes of Kevin.

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Mark aimed the special light directly into the eyes of Kevin. In that precise moment, Kelly appeared in the living room, wearing a wedding dress, roses in her hair and makeup into her face."

Thanks.

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Mark aimed the special light directly into [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] Kevin's eyes. [STRIKE]of Kevin.[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]In[/STRIKE] At that precise moment, Kelly appeared in the living room, wearing a wedding dress, and with roses in her hair and makeup [STRIKE]into[/STRIKE] on her face ."

Thanks.

See above.

What's a "special light"?

 

[Nikitus]

Dear emsr2d2:

Thanks for your help.

Special light is a light used for special effects.

Thanks.

 

[emsr2d2]

So is Mark a special effects technician on the crew of a film or TV series?

 

[Nikitus]

Dear emsr2d2:

Mark is planning a special event for a birthday. He will use special effects.

Thanks.

 

[emsr2d2]

If it's still at the planning stage, why is post #1 written in the past tense?