Silverhand
Banned
- Joined
- Jul 20, 2021
- Location
- Usa
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Hausa
- Home Country
- Kyrgyzstan
- Current Location
- Oman
Could you teachers and native speakers correct the mistakes in my text?
Mark had a turbulent upbringing. His father James, a factory worker, was abusive and violent towards both Mark and his mother. The young Mark's shyness and impeccable work in school got him labeled as a "teacher's pet" and targeted as a subject for bullying. James did not appreciate having a bullied son and roared at him to use violence in dealing with the bullies. Due to his mother's calm demeanor, influence and disgust towards men who worked in common manual labor, Mark was determined not to become like his father and directed all his efforts into his education, regularly scoring top marks. He became a brilliant and accomplished nuclear physicist and mechanical engineer. Soon after being hired by Lockheed, Mark designed and assembled a set of highly advanced mechanical arms controlled via a brain–computer interface to assist him with his research into atomic physics. The tentacle-like appendages were impervious to heat and electromagnetic radiation, while being capable of great strength and highly precise movement. These were attached to his body with a stainless steel harness. The device launched into the market with a starting cost of 10 million dollars due to its innumerable applications.
Mark had a turbulent upbringing. His father James, a factory worker, was abusive and violent towards both Mark and his mother. The young Mark's shyness and impeccable work in school got him labeled as a "teacher's pet" and targeted as a subject for bullying. James did not appreciate having a bullied son and roared at him to use violence in dealing with the bullies. Due to his mother's calm demeanor, influence and disgust towards men who worked in common manual labor, Mark was determined not to become like his father and directed all his efforts into his education, regularly scoring top marks. He became a brilliant and accomplished nuclear physicist and mechanical engineer. Soon after being hired by Lockheed, Mark designed and assembled a set of highly advanced mechanical arms controlled via a brain–computer interface to assist him with his research into atomic physics. The tentacle-like appendages were impervious to heat and electromagnetic radiation, while being capable of great strength and highly precise movement. These were attached to his body with a stainless steel harness. The device launched into the market with a starting cost of 10 million dollars due to its innumerable applications.
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