keannu
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- Dec 27, 2010
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- Student or Learner
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- Korean
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- South Korea
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- South Korea
Title : My Favorite Subject
My favorite subjects are science and math. I liked English and Korean the most when I was younger because science and math were difficult to understand. As my grade upgraded/went up, it became easier for me to understand science and math. Maybe it's because it's English and Korean, not a computational subject that requires a lot of writing.
Science is also divided into several parts. Science is solving and finding answers by questioning everything on Earth. Researchers constantly research and search for secrets and, but what students learn at school is simply solving the riddles that researchers have found out.
Mathematics is important to learn as it makes everything we use into calculations. I also got interested in Mathematics for calculating using symbols and numbers.
I heard that the higher the grade, the more people give up math and science, but I lost interest in English and Korean. But math and science are necessary because I have to write a report or thesis on them..
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Could you correct the two underlined parts?
My favorite subjects are science and math. I liked English and Korean the most when I was younger because science and math were difficult to understand. As my grade upgraded/went up, it became easier for me to understand science and math. Maybe it's because it's English and Korean, not a computational subject that requires a lot of writing.
Science is also divided into several parts. Science is solving and finding answers by questioning everything on Earth. Researchers constantly research and search for secrets and, but what students learn at school is simply solving the riddles that researchers have found out.
Mathematics is important to learn as it makes everything we use into calculations. I also got interested in Mathematics for calculating using symbols and numbers.
I heard that the higher the grade, the more people give up math and science, but I lost interest in English and Korean. But math and science are necessary because I have to write a report or thesis on them..
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Could you correct the two underlined parts?