Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
Please, would you proofread my sentences:
They all returned to the van and presently they were rolling along the motorway. They passed through the same flat country until in the distance he could see the high-rises and the factory chimneys of the big city. The golden arches of the well-known fast food chain shone in the sun, followed by the large hoardings advertising soft drinks, cars, electronic products and mobile phones. The vehicles were speeding fast and their passengers could just glance shortly at one hoarding before their eyes would be noticing another, but probably someone had worked out that these fleeting seconds would be enough for a message to make itself engraved in the human mind.
They all returned to the van and presently they were rolling along the motorway. They passed through the same flat country until in the distance he could see the high-rises and the factory chimneys of the big city. The golden arches of the well-known fast food chain shone in the sun, followed by the large hoardings advertising soft drinks, cars, electronic products and mobile phones. The vehicles were speeding fast and their passengers could just glance shortly at one hoarding before their eyes would be noticing another, but probably someone had worked out that these fleeting seconds would be enough for a message to make itself engraved in the human mind.