dcintel
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Hi all,
Please help me correct the following piece of writing for vocabulary and grammar. It is for practice purpose only.
Topic: There is a problem in the road outside your house.
Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to the delay of fixing a lamppost damage due to car accident which occurred on Feb 20.
My name is David and currently living in 26/7 Hayfield Road, Wellington which is near a junction with the City Road. I have been living here more than 10 years since I relocated from Auckland. I am really pleased living here since all our concerns have been solved after reporting just in a short period of time, except this time.
Last week, there was a car accident near where I am living. The accident caused a lamppost, which is just 10 meters from my house, collapsed. I reported this problem right after it happened on Feb-20, but nothing has been changed until now. The damage of the lamp not only causes inconvenience for my families due to the lack of light near my house, but also potentially leads to the risk of another car accident.
Please take the collapsed lamppost as a matter of urgency. I request you must arrange a workman to observe the problem and take appropriate action immediately in order to secure the safety for our community.
We are looking forward to hearing from rapid response.
Yours faithfully,
David Beckham
Please help me correct the following piece of writing for vocabulary and grammar. It is for practice purpose only.
Topic: There is a problem in the road outside your house.
Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter:
- introduce yourself
- explain what the problem is
- tell the councilor what you would like to be done
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to the delay of fixing a lamppost damage due to car accident which occurred on Feb 20.
My name is David and currently living in 26/7 Hayfield Road, Wellington which is near a junction with the City Road. I have been living here more than 10 years since I relocated from Auckland. I am really pleased living here since all our concerns have been solved after reporting just in a short period of time, except this time.
Last week, there was a car accident near where I am living. The accident caused a lamppost, which is just 10 meters from my house, collapsed. I reported this problem right after it happened on Feb-20, but nothing has been changed until now. The damage of the lamp not only causes inconvenience for my families due to the lack of light near my house, but also potentially leads to the risk of another car accident.
Please take the collapsed lamppost as a matter of urgency. I request you must arrange a workman to observe the problem and take appropriate action immediately in order to secure the safety for our community.
We are looking forward to hearing from rapid response.
Yours faithfully,
David Beckham