marcofabri
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use of the word "even" "still" and "group" in the same sentence
Hi,
I´d like to hear from you about the use of the word "even" and "still" in the same sentence. The idea was to emphasize the results obtained in the CR18 group.
Also, if I use the word "group" for the first time in the sentence, can I omit this word thereafter ?
The most striking result was the effect of calorie restriction on visceral fat weight. CR18 group had 5-7 x lower visceral fat weight than the AL18 group and even when evaluated the visceral fat/body weight ratio CR18 still presented 3-4 x lower visceral fat weight than AL18.
Hi,
I´d like to hear from you about the use of the word "even" and "still" in the same sentence. The idea was to emphasize the results obtained in the CR18 group.
Also, if I use the word "group" for the first time in the sentence, can I omit this word thereafter ?
The most striking result was the effect of calorie restriction on visceral fat weight. CR18 group had 5-7 x lower visceral fat weight than the AL18 group and even when evaluated the visceral fat/body weight ratio CR18 still presented 3-4 x lower visceral fat weight than AL18.