Mr. TA
New member
- Joined
- Feb 11, 2012
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- German
- Home Country
- Germany
- Current Location
- Ukraine
Hello,
I am currently applying to different universities in the UK and the final sentence of my personal statement is as follows:
I have come to the conclusion that studying Masters X at University Y is the right choice for me and I would be very excited if I were to receive an offer.
I was wondering if this is correct or if it needs to say: ... I would be very excited if I received an offer
Thanks for the help!!
Mr. TA
I am currently applying to different universities in the UK and the final sentence of my personal statement is as follows:
I have come to the conclusion that studying Masters X at University Y is the right choice for me and I would be very excited if I were to receive an offer.
I was wondering if this is correct or if it needs to say: ... I would be very excited if I received an offer
Thanks for the help!!
Mr. TA