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[powermetal114]

Would you please check this? Thanks

[FONT=&quot]Dear Mr. May:[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Thank you for your email. Mrs. Breidt has already asked me to include the bio-data page from my passport at the time I send the filled out PD2330-form to her. So I can do it at any time now if you are going to fill this form out for me.
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[FONT=&quot]I have asked Mr. Brown some questions which you can find below. Would you please just take a look at the question no. 2 as the others become less important to me if I am not going (or will not supposed) to fill in the form DS2019.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Thank you![/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Kai Uwe Ansorge
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[powermetal114]

[FONT=&quot]Dear Mr. May:[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Thank you for your email. Mrs. Breidt has already asked me to include the bio-data page from my passport at the time I send the filled out PD2330-form to her. I can do it at any time now as you seem to fill this form out for me.
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[FONT=&quot]I have asked Mr. Brown some questions which you can find below. Would you please have a look at the question no. 2 as the others become less important to me if I am not going (or will not supposed) to fill in the form DS2019.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Thank you![/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Kai Uwe Ansorge[/FONT]

 

[5jj]

Powermetal, you have already posted this question. Please don't post the same question in more than one thread.