gigi_cheung
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- Joined
- Apr 19, 2011
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Hong Kong
- Current Location
- United States
hello,, i have recently summited a late application to universities,, so i need to write an e-mail to inform the admission tutors... i always having troubles writing formal letters/e-mails, because my English is not very good.. can you please check or re-word my letter for me please.... thank you for helping,,, and my draft is below:
Dear Sir,
I feel that I must inform and apologize for my late UCAS application for the course Chemistry with Forensic science. The reason for this delay was because of my immigration to the United States.
I understand that you might be concerned that this is the second time that I apply this university; my application was withdrawn due to family financial issues last year. However this issue has been resolved this year, as I am able to apply FAFSA as a permanent resident in the US
I am hoping that I would still have the opportunity to be considered again under this course because I am enthusiastic about Chemistry and Forensic Science. It is my wish to be able to study at Heriot –Watt University.
I apologize again for this delayed application and any inconvenience this delay had cause.
Thank you for your time in reading this e-mail and I look forward to hear from you soon.
Your sincerely,
Sui Chi Cheung (Gigi)
Dear Sir,
I feel that I must inform and apologize for my late UCAS application for the course Chemistry with Forensic science. The reason for this delay was because of my immigration to the United States.
I understand that you might be concerned that this is the second time that I apply this university; my application was withdrawn due to family financial issues last year. However this issue has been resolved this year, as I am able to apply FAFSA as a permanent resident in the US
I am hoping that I would still have the opportunity to be considered again under this course because I am enthusiastic about Chemistry and Forensic Science. It is my wish to be able to study at Heriot –Watt University.
I apologize again for this delayed application and any inconvenience this delay had cause.
Thank you for your time in reading this e-mail and I look forward to hear from you soon.
Your sincerely,
Sui Chi Cheung (Gigi)