induces/guides prepayment.

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keannu

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[FONT=&#48148]And many Korean restaurants have electrical kiosks to order foods. When a customer orders an item on the touch pad and pays it by credit card/with a credit card, it passes the order on to the kitchen automatically. It can reduce labor cost, and also induces/guides prepayment.

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And many Korean restaurants have electrical kiosks to order [STRIKE]foods[/STRIKE] food. When a customer orders an item on the touch pad and pays for it by credit card/with a credit card, [STRIKE]it passes the order on to the kitchen automatically[/STRIKE] the order is passed automatically to the kitchen. [STRIKE]It[/STRIKE] This can reduce labor costs, and also [STRIKE]induces/guides[/STRIKE] encourage prepayment.

Note my suggested changes above. As in a previous thread, I have removed the underlining because I have changed other parts. Just for once (in the second sentence), the passive is better than the active.
 
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