Check out my resume in English please

[TheJoker]

Personal information:
Born on xx January 19xx
Family status: single
Address of living:
Phone:
e-mail:
Education:
Higher education
09.2005 г.– 06.2010 Тyumen State Oil and Gas University
Institute of Geology and Geoinformatics
Specialty: Geophysical researches of well
(GPA (Russia) 5.0, GPA (USA) 4.0)

Additional education:
GeologGold+Fasimage Course Paradigm; Scholl of teacher skills; School etiquette of business communication.

Work experience:
04.2007 – 06.2008 – JSC «Tyumenneftegeofizika», Department of scientific research. Geophysicist.
1)Seismic data processing
2)Well data interpretation

10.2007 009. LLC «Tyumengeofizika» (moonlighting). Technician Geophysicist
1) Well data interpretation;
2)Generation and interpretation petro physical data;
3) Making different tables for reports of estimates of volumes in-place;
4) To unify database of Lukoil;
5) Well logs data digitizing .

06.2008-08.2008гг.- JSC «Surgutneftegas», «Surgutneftegeofizika»
Technician Geophysicist
1) Geophysical research in the cased whole and open hole;
2) Calibration down hole equipment.

10.2008-till present time – OAO Gazprom, ООО «Tyumenniigiprogas», Laboratory of Geophysics Neocomian reservoir 10.2008-06.2010 Technician Geophysicist. From 06.2010-till present time -Engineer
1) Well data interpretation;
2) Writing chapters for reports of estimates of volumes in-place;
3) Generation and interpretation petro physical data;
4) Generation geological and geophysical information for the oilfield;
5) Well logs data digitizing .



Additional information:
Computer skills: experienced user (MS Windows; MS Office 2003/2007). Soft for work: Geo Office Solver, Geolog 6.7.1 (Paradigm), GeoPoisk,
Languages: English (intermediate-level), German with a dictionary.
Personal qualities: easily-trained, determined, responsible, and hardworking, without bad habits.
Hobbies: table tennis, basketball, track and field, chess

 

[TheJoker]

Correct the mistakes pls

 

[Rover_KE]

That looks good to me, Joker.

I just spotted 'Scholl of teacher skills'.

I'm not qualified to comment on the technical content of your text.

Rover

 

[freezeframe]

Personal information:
Born on xx January 19xx
Family status: single
Address of living:
Phone:
e-mail:
Education:
Higher education
09.2005 г.– 06.2010 Тyumen State Oil and Gas University
Institute of Geology and Geoinformatics
Specialty: Geophysical researches of well
(GPA (Russia) 5.0, GPA (USA) 4.0)

Additional education:
GeologGold+Fasimage Course Paradigm; Scholl of teacher skills; School etiquette of business communication.

Work experience:
04.2007 – 06.2008 – JSC «Tyumenneftegeofizika», Department of scientific research. Geophysicist.
1)Seismic data processing
2)Well data interpretation

10.2007 009. LLC «Tyumengeofizika» (moonlighting). Technician Geophysicist
1) Well data interpretation;
2)Generation and interpretation petro physical data;
3) Making different tables for reports of estimates of volumes in-place;
4) To unify database of Lukoil;
5) Well logs data digitizing .

06.2008-08.2008гг.- JSC «Surgutneftegas», «Surgutneftegeofizika»
Technician Geophysicist
1) Geophysical research in the cased whole and open hole;
2) Calibration down hole equipment.

10.2008-till present time – OAO Gazprom, ООО «Tyumenniigiprogas», Laboratory of Geophysics Neocomian reservoir 10.2008-06.2010 Technician Geophysicist. From 06.2010-till present time -Engineer
1) Well data interpretation;
2) Writing chapters for reports of estimates of volumes in-place;
3) Generation and interpretation petro physical data;
4) Generation geological and geophysical information for the oilfield;
5) Well logs data digitizing .



Additional information:
Computer skills: experienced user (MS Windows; MS Office 2003/2007). Soft for work: Geo Office Solver, Geolog 6.7.1 (Paradigm), GeoPoisk,
Languages: English (intermediate-level), German with a dictionary.
Personal qualities: easily-trained, determined, responsible, and hardworking, without bad habits.
Hobbies: table tennis, basketball, track and field, chess

Some comments:

We don't usually include family status or date of birth on resumes.
"Geophysical researches of well" sounds strange -- what kind of well? just one well? We don't usually write research in plural

When you describe your duties at your previous jobs, you need to use active voice.
ex. 1) Well data interpretation; >> Interpreted well data.
This sounds especially odd: 4) To unify database of Lukoil;

I'm not familiar with your terminology but 2) Calibration down hole equipment. sounds strange >> what is "down hole equipment"? And you need "of" after "calibration".

Soft for work: >> I assume you mean software. We do not shorten words on resumes, this is a formal document.

Same for 10.2008-till present time >> 10.2008 -- present

09.2005 г. >> г. doesn't mean anything to an English speaker; we do not add anything like that after the year.

Good luck.

 

[TheJoker]

Rover_KE
freezeframe

Thank you so musch for your posts.

 

[luschen]

Down hole equipment is the correct term - sensors, drill heads, anything you put down the hole.

 

[MarkD17]

ok

 

[LHROediting]

Hello,

I have a few critiques and suggestions regarding your resume.

* Remove your family status and age (These are unnecessary in the U.S., and you can actually be discriminated against by putting this information on your resume.)
* Change the formatting of your dates of employment (For example, instead of 06.2008, use 06/2008 or June 2008.)
* Remove 5.0 GPA, Russia (It is irrelevant, but it also gives employers a change to discriminate, even though it's illegal.)
* Instead of using numbers under your job descriptions, use bullet points or "*" (asterisks). Also, include the same amount of descriptions for each job.
(With any resume, consistency is very important.)

I would be happy to help you with your resume further. I have my own business, LHROediting.com, where I provide a variety of services including editing and rewriting resumes. Feel free to get in touch with me through this forum or through my e-mail on my website.

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Lucy Helenna Rodriguez O'Brien
LHRO Editing