[Grammar] Hosting a sporting event costs millions for the provision of such a huge event.

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saloom2

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Hello everyone,

Does this sentence sound natural?

Hosting a sporting event costs millions for the provision of such a huge event.
 
Hosting a (huge) sporting (or sports) event costs millions.

End it there. Everying else is redundant.
 
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