After winning an Olympic medal

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After winning an Olympic medal, the pole vaulter Kevin Hill returned to his hometown, where he received a hero's welcome. Hundreds of people gathered in the main square to shake hands and talk with him. Kevin was overwhelmed with emotions and got tears in his eyes. In his speech, he thanked all who had supported him and stood by him even when was injured and was unable to compete.
 

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After winning an Olympic medal, the pole vaulter Kevin Hill returned to his hometown, where he received a hero's welcome. Hundreds of people gathered in the main square to shake hands and talk with him. Kevin was overwhelmed with emotion[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] and got tears in his eyes. In his speech, he thanked all who had supported him and stood by him even when he was injured and was unable to compete.

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