Tan Elaine
Key Member
- Joined
- Jun 29, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- English
- Home Country
- Hong Kong
- Current Location
- Hong Kong
The protest drew about 100 people yesterday, many of them students and academics.
The protest drew about 100 people yesterday, many of whom were students and academics.
Is the first sentence fine? It appears to be a comma splice to me.
Thanks.
The protest drew about 100 people yesterday, many of whom were students and academics.
Is the first sentence fine? It appears to be a comma splice to me.
Thanks.