Please take a look at this short paragraph. In my opinion Dr. Evil was the best come

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Please take a look at this short paragraph.

In my opinion Dr. Evil was the best comedic movie villian of ALL time, aside from Ken Jeong's character in The Hang Over trilogy. I dont remember a time where I laughed harder and louder at the movies than when I watched the Austin Powers trilogy. I really hope they make another Austin Powers movie. I miss the 90s!
 

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Other than don't, is everything else [strike]is[/strike] okay?

You need a comma after "opinion". You have misspelt "villain" in your piece. I would use "I don't remember a time when ...".

Everything else is OK.
 
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I would use "I don't remember a time when ...".

So, is I don't remember a time where - wrong?
 

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You'll hear it but it makes more sense for me to use "when" if you are referring to time.
 
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