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"As a first step, the services that are based on X’s contracts with RMAF are to be performed."

I would like to get rid of the "that are based" part. Would this work?

As a first step, the services resulting from X’s contracts with RMAF are to be performed.

Thanks.
 
Obligations, etc, could result from a contract, but can a service?
 
Obligations, etc, could result from a contract, but can a service?

That's exactly what I was wondering. The answer is probably "no."
 
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"As a first step, the services that are based on X’s contracts with RMAF are to be performed."


As a first step, the services due to X's contracts with RMAF are to be performed.

As a first step, the services based on X's contracts with RMAF are to be performed.

As a first step, X's contracts services with RMAF are to be performed.

As a first step, the services required by X's contracts with RMAF are to be perfomed.

Above are some suggestions.
 
How about this?

"The services pursuant to X's contracts with R are to be performed."

I'm not sure "pursuant to" can be used in this way.
 
How about this?

"The services pursuant to X's contracts with R are to be performed."

I'm not sure "pursuant to" can be used in this way.
What about "described in", "specified in" or "set out in"?
 
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