Suthipong
Member
- Joined
- Oct 1, 2010
- Member Type
- Other
- Native Language
- Thai
- Home Country
- Thailand
- Current Location
- Thailand
My wife writes her diary to practice her English.
In the afternoon, I went to my own house. I cleaned the floor and stayed there for two hours. When I came back home, I stopped at the market near my own house and bought some food.
I suggested her to clearify about own house that might be confusing.
What should we say?
I went to my new house which I've just bought one for my own. I cleaned the floor and stayed there for two hours. When I came back home, I stopped at the market near that house and bought some food.
Please correct the writing for us.
In the afternoon, I went to my own house. I cleaned the floor and stayed there for two hours. When I came back home, I stopped at the market near my own house and bought some food.
I suggested her to clearify about own house that might be confusing.
What should we say?
I went to my new house which I've just bought one for my own. I cleaned the floor and stayed there for two hours. When I came back home, I stopped at the market near that house and bought some food.
Please correct the writing for us.