cittiemutzzz
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please,, any one can help me?,, find the mistake on this text
I have an idol. My idiol name is Robert Pattinson. He was born on 13 may 1986. Her face I handsome and cool. He has a beautiful green eye with charming smile…. He is an English actor. Not only can acting but also he can singing. He enjoys music and he is an excellent musician. He can playing both the guitar and Piano. He started his career when he acting amateur plays with the Barnes Theatre Company art when he was 15 years old. Afterward, he took screen role like Curse of the Ring at 2004. An then in 2003 Robert took on the role of Cedric Diggory in Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. Later.. he landed the leading role of Edward Cullen in the film adaption of the twilight novels by Stephenie Meyer and came to wordwide international fame. In twilight film he met Kristen Stewart as Bella Swan. Both of them fall in love in filming location. Now Kristen become his girlfriend. Althought how he is popular and has many fanatic fans, he still humble and not arrogant:-D:-D
I have an idol. My idiol name is Robert Pattinson. He was born on 13 may 1986. Her face I handsome and cool. He has a beautiful green eye with charming smile…. He is an English actor. Not only can acting but also he can singing. He enjoys music and he is an excellent musician. He can playing both the guitar and Piano. He started his career when he acting amateur plays with the Barnes Theatre Company art when he was 15 years old. Afterward, he took screen role like Curse of the Ring at 2004. An then in 2003 Robert took on the role of Cedric Diggory in Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. Later.. he landed the leading role of Edward Cullen in the film adaption of the twilight novels by Stephenie Meyer and came to wordwide international fame. In twilight film he met Kristen Stewart as Bella Swan. Both of them fall in love in filming location. Now Kristen become his girlfriend. Althought how he is popular and has many fanatic fans, he still humble and not arrogant:-D:-D