freezeframe
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- Joined
- Mar 28, 2011
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- Academic
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- English
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- Canada
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- Canada
I've been fighting with this sentence for 30 minutes now, rewriting it about six times. I can't read it objectively anymore. :-D
How does it sound to you? In particular the last part.
[FONT="]It also depicts Frances Perkins who was the [FONT="]US[/FONT][FONT="] Secretary of Labor under President Franklin D. Roosevelt and the first woman appointed to the United States Cabinet, and who is buried in [/FONT][FONT="]Maine[/FONT][FONT="].[/FONT][/FONT]
Thank you.
How does it sound to you? In particular the last part.
[FONT="]It also depicts Frances Perkins who was the [FONT="]US[/FONT][FONT="] Secretary of Labor under President Franklin D. Roosevelt and the first woman appointed to the United States Cabinet, and who is buried in [/FONT][FONT="]Maine[/FONT][FONT="].[/FONT][/FONT]
Thank you.
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