I want to correct this letter (specially highlighted area) with an addings

[romain.swega]

With reference to the expression of interest published by your company, I forward you herewith my curriculum vitae, with regard to the above post for your kind perusal.

I was employed at Leader International (PVt) Ltd, from 2004 – 2006 & Leader Automobile (Pvt) Ltd, from 2008 - 2010 in the capacity of Accounts Executive and I am currently attached to The Standard Credit Lanka Ltd, since 2010 in the capacity of Administration Executive.

I am following Advance Certificate in Business Management Course at NIBM and I am planning to follow Financial and Management Accounting Course at same place. My ambition is make up my career path from accounting side with stable company.

 

[new2grammar]

With reference to the expression of interest published by your company, I forward you herewith my curriculum vitae, with regard to the above post for your kind perusal.

I was employed at Leader International (PVt) Ltd, from 2004 – 2006 & Leader Automobile (Pvt) Ltd, from 2008 - 2010 in the capacity of Accounts Executive and I am currently attached to The Standard Credit Lanka Ltd, since 2010 in the capacity of Administration Executive.

I am following Advance Certificate in Business Management Course at NIBM and I am planning to follow Financial and Management Accounting Course at same place. My ambition is make up my career path from accounting side with stable company.

NOT A TEACHER

I am pursuing Advance Certificate in Business Management Course from NIBM, and I am also planning to do Financial and Management Accounting Course from the same institute. My career goal to be a successful accountant in a reputed company.

I suggest you want to same something like this.

Hope it helps

 

[riquecohen]

NOT A TEACHER

I am pursuing Advance Certificate in Business Management Course from NIBM, and I am also planning to do Financial and Management Accounting Course from the same institute. My career goal to be a successful accountant in a reputed company.

I suggest you want to same something like this.

Hope it helps

new2grammar-
Check a dictionary for the difference between reputed and reputable.

 

[new2grammar]

new2grammar-
Check a dictionary for the difference between reputed and reputable.

It should be reputable firms

 

[Tan Elaine]

NOT A TEACHER

I am pursuing Advance Certificate in Business Management Course from NIBM, and I am also planning to do Financial and Management Accounting Course from the same institute. My career goal to be a successful accountant in a reputed company.

I suggest you want to same something like this.

Hope it helps

I think it should be 'Advanced'.