Tan Elaine
Key Member
- Joined
- Jun 29, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- English
- Home Country
- Hong Kong
- Current Location
- Hong Kong
1. A person with a low life condition will not be able to smile, thus his/her health will be affected.
2. A person with a low life condition will not be able to smile, thus affecting his/her health.
I believe sentence 1 is OK but I doubt if 2 is acceptable. Please clear my doubt.
Thanks.
2. A person with a low life condition will not be able to smile, thus affecting his/her health.
I believe sentence 1 is OK but I doubt if 2 is acceptable. Please clear my doubt.
Thanks.