rainous
Member
- Joined
- Jun 8, 2011
- Member Type
- Other
- Native Language
- Galician
- Home Country
- Armenia
- Current Location
- Antilles
1. The toll divorces have taken on our society is too dire to simply gloss them over as mere personal problems.
2. The toll it has taken on our society is too dire to simply gloss over the issues of divorce as mere personal problems.
Could someone please elaborate on these two sentences I wrote? Which one sounds better? Maybe neither? Are they even grammatically correct or understandable even?
(I want to stick with the second one if it's grammatically correct. But I don't know...)
Much thanks
2. The toll it has taken on our society is too dire to simply gloss over the issues of divorce as mere personal problems.
Could someone please elaborate on these two sentences I wrote? Which one sounds better? Maybe neither? Are they even grammatically correct or understandable even?
(I want to stick with the second one if it's grammatically correct. But I don't know...)
Much thanks