duiter
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- May 22, 2010
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Indonesian
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- Malaysia
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- Indonesia
Dear all,
I read this essay written by a native speaker
Personally, I think prison should be the last option when all else has failed
Is "personally " essential for this sentence ?
Is "personally" making this sentence wordy ?
Is it correcct to say ....all else fail, instead of has failed
Many thanks
I read this essay written by a native speaker
Personally, I think prison should be the last option when all else has failed
Is "personally " essential for this sentence ?
Is "personally" making this sentence wordy ?
Is it correcct to say ....all else fail, instead of has failed
Many thanks