unpakwon
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jun 7, 2007
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
- Current Location
- South Korea
Would you please find an alternative word to "transitions" in the following? It's confusing.
Elise was a stickler for perfection, reminding people that their focused efforts often meant the difference between life and death. Mistakes were intolerable and seamless transitions between teams were mandatory. Yet, as she evaluated everyone around her, she was perpetually negative.
Thank you.
Elise was a stickler for perfection, reminding people that their focused efforts often meant the difference between life and death. Mistakes were intolerable and seamless transitions between teams were mandatory. Yet, as she evaluated everyone around her, she was perpetually negative.
Thank you.