lanatsotsoria
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Hi, I know you don't check homeworks but this topic I wrote during class and teacher has already checked it .I'm curious which mistakes she has missed, and also can you give me advices on how to write a decent topic ?Thaks in advance.I really appreciate your help) Theme of the topic was: " Some people think that using electric heater is better than gas heater .Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? State your opinion and support it with reasons and examples ."
There many different ways to protect yourself from cold.You can put on winter clouthes ,but the best is to get an electric or gas heater.
Basically, most people use one of the two above mentioned heaters.People choose heaters depending on which one is cheaper, beacause It's hard to deal with a huge bill in the end of a month.Besides costs, people consider safety issues as well.As we know, gas heaters are quite dangerous.If not attached properly gas won't burn wholy and will lead to the poisoning or even death.On the other hand, an electric heater is safer.If you don't leave It beside easily flaming things,of course.
Anyway,if we compare an electric and a gas heater, in safety an electric heater has an advantage .
Thus, I agree with the idea that people using an electric heater is better than gas heater.Meanwhile gas heaters are very popular and convenient and the fact is that many people are using them and ironicly me as well.( She said I had to write like me as well )
There many different ways to protect yourself from cold.You can put on winter clouthes ,but the best is to get an electric or gas heater.
Basically, most people use one of the two above mentioned heaters.People choose heaters depending on which one is cheaper, beacause It's hard to deal with a huge bill in the end of a month.Besides costs, people consider safety issues as well.As we know, gas heaters are quite dangerous.If not attached properly gas won't burn wholy and will lead to the poisoning or even death.On the other hand, an electric heater is safer.If you don't leave It beside easily flaming things,of course.
Anyway,if we compare an electric and a gas heater, in safety an electric heater has an advantage .
Thus, I agree with the idea that people using an electric heater is better than gas heater.Meanwhile gas heaters are very popular and convenient and the fact is that many people are using them and ironicly me as well.( She said I had to write like me as well )