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I'm not a journalist. I'm just a student and my major is chemistry so I need someone help me to check my mistakes in this article. I will post it on website in order to help her. Thank you so much !
An orphan girl was infected with HIV and would like to become a doctor.
When her mother had the second baby, she uncovered her whole family catched a century-disease. Since then, disasters running happen and took three lifes in the family, just remained 9 years old kid and her old paternal grandmother.
This is Do Tra My kid of pitiful situation. She lives at 67 hamlet, Trieu Son commune, Thanh Hoa district. Her paternal grandmother name is Le Thi Toi.
In the empty house, Mrs. Le Thi Toi grieved at death of her husband. She had one son and two daughters. Her eldest son named Do Xuan Kien. He is a good-natured and painstaking person. When he was a student, he started to do hired labour. After that he studied to drive car and got married to Nguyen Thi Lan who lived in neighbouring village.
In 2003, Their the first baby was born but they had soon paternal grandparents taken care of kid so that they could go to the Southern to work. Their hard and hurried life would still go on if they didn’t have that day of fate which Mrs. Lan born the second baby, Tra My.
Doctor informed Mrs. Lan of catching HIV. She was led to local hospital, doctor at that time was afraid of carrying out Mrs Lan’s deliver, she was moved another place. All members in her family shocked, Mr. Kien, Mrs. Lan and their two daughters catched HIV.
“When my son Mr. Kien went home, parent like me just hugged him with heart-breaking and bewailed Kien‘s lot. I do not why my family is in distress” – Mrs. Tuoi said in a voice choked.
And this disease was taken fate lifes. In April 2006, Mr. Kien died, at the end of the year Mrs. Toi’s youngest child died too and in 2007 Mrs. Lan also died. Until now Mrs. Toi does not know clearly reason how to infect of her descendants.
“One after another my descendants have gone and never come back to old mother like me, so I live without meaning ! I just want to go with them but I think of my single niece, Tra My. If I die who will take care of her ?…” – She cried and said.
Mr. Trinh Van Nam, leader of hamlet told: “When Tra My was 4 years old, nobody dare nourished her because they were afraid of catching HIV. She was moved to the orphanage but they did not accept her because of her disease. Then she was moved to commune and commune took her back halmet. Somebody did love her but they were needy. They sometimes gave her rice, vegetables and fishes. Being low intellectual standards of the people, so many people keep away from her and several forbid their children to make friend with her.”
Maternal grandparents did not also dare come close to her, except that they gave her some clothes on Tet vacation. Afterwards, the health cadre wholeheartedly encouraged, paternal grandmother agreed with nourishing her. Tra My just has paternal grandmother and her teddy bear to make friend. They lean on each other to live in small and solitary house which behinds the hill. Mrs. Toi is often sick. She stayed awake all night because of poor child, Tra My confided in: “ If I have parents the same as my friends, my grandmother would not be unhappy.”
Tra My goes to school. First day no one wanted to sit next to her but the teacher explained thoroughly, students treated exceptionally her well. However, Tra My is complex about her destiny so she silently seats at the back of the class.
Mr. Duong Viet Trung – director of class 3A, Hop Ly primary school said: “Tra My is an obident children. First day going to school she was fearful to get in touch with everyone in class. But teachers always do love her and consider about her situation, Tra My still studies in grade 3 now.”
She spontaneously said when asked about her dream: “I wish I were an excellent doctor to cure anybody catches HIV like me so that my parents and my sister did not die.” She has to struggle for her life day after day.
Now, the precious property in her house is old bicycle which Mr. Kien bequeathed in order to meet and see off Tra My and four a month Mrs. Toi regularly rides over 10 kilometers to take medicine for Tra My. Her two daughters live in Quang Tri city and seldom visit Mrs. Toi so they can not help her.
Mr. Trinh Van Nam said more: “Mr. Toi has hard extremely circumstance. Authorities make policy to support her 480 000 VNĐ every month (30 USD) but they are still hard.”
An orphan girl was infected with HIV and would like to become a doctor.
When her mother had the second baby, she uncovered her whole family catched a century-disease. Since then, disasters running happen and took three lifes in the family, just remained 9 years old kid and her old paternal grandmother.
This is Do Tra My kid of pitiful situation. She lives at 67 hamlet, Trieu Son commune, Thanh Hoa district. Her paternal grandmother name is Le Thi Toi.
In 2003, Their the first baby was born but they had soon paternal grandparents taken care of kid so that they could go to the Southern to work. Their hard and hurried life would still go on if they didn’t have that day of fate which Mrs. Lan born the second baby, Tra My.
Doctor informed Mrs. Lan of catching HIV. She was led to local hospital, doctor at that time was afraid of carrying out Mrs Lan’s deliver, she was moved another place. All members in her family shocked, Mr. Kien, Mrs. Lan and their two daughters catched HIV.
“When my son Mr. Kien went home, parent like me just hugged him with heart-breaking and bewailed Kien‘s lot. I do not why my family is in distress” – Mrs. Tuoi said in a voice choked.
And this disease was taken fate lifes. In April 2006, Mr. Kien died, at the end of the year Mrs. Toi’s youngest child died too and in 2007 Mrs. Lan also died. Until now Mrs. Toi does not know clearly reason how to infect of her descendants.
“One after another my descendants have gone and never come back to old mother like me, so I live without meaning ! I just want to go with them but I think of my single niece, Tra My. If I die who will take care of her ?…” – She cried and said.
Mr. Trinh Van Nam, leader of hamlet told: “When Tra My was 4 years old, nobody dare nourished her because they were afraid of catching HIV. She was moved to the orphanage but they did not accept her because of her disease. Then she was moved to commune and commune took her back halmet. Somebody did love her but they were needy. They sometimes gave her rice, vegetables and fishes. Being low intellectual standards of the people, so many people keep away from her and several forbid their children to make friend with her.”
Maternal grandparents did not also dare come close to her, except that they gave her some clothes on Tet vacation. Afterwards, the health cadre wholeheartedly encouraged, paternal grandmother agreed with nourishing her. Tra My just has paternal grandmother and her teddy bear to make friend. They lean on each other to live in small and solitary house which behinds the hill. Mrs. Toi is often sick. She stayed awake all night because of poor child, Tra My confided in: “ If I have parents the same as my friends, my grandmother would not be unhappy.”
Tra My goes to school. First day no one wanted to sit next to her but the teacher explained thoroughly, students treated exceptionally her well. However, Tra My is complex about her destiny so she silently seats at the back of the class.
Mr. Duong Viet Trung – director of class 3A, Hop Ly primary school said: “Tra My is an obident children. First day going to school she was fearful to get in touch with everyone in class. But teachers always do love her and consider about her situation, Tra My still studies in grade 3 now.”
She spontaneously said when asked about her dream: “I wish I were an excellent doctor to cure anybody catches HIV like me so that my parents and my sister did not die.” She has to struggle for her life day after day.
Now, the precious property in her house is old bicycle which Mr. Kien bequeathed in order to meet and see off Tra My and four a month Mrs. Toi regularly rides over 10 kilometers to take medicine for Tra My. Her two daughters live in Quang Tri city and seldom visit Mrs. Toi so they can not help her.
Mr. Trinh Van Nam said more: “Mr. Toi has hard extremely circumstance. Authorities make policy to support her 480 000 VNĐ every month (30 USD) but they are still hard.”