Can you tell me whether those two sentence are correct? Thanks.

[heyuting]

Can you tell me whether those two sentence are correct? Thanks.

"Some violent programs affect children's behavior in a wrong way. According to a survey, children who live in violent envrionments have more chance to commit crimes. "

"Watching TV occupies a large amount of children's time, which is supposed to use to study."

 

[shannico]

Can you tell me whether those two sentence are correct? Thanks.

" [STRIKE]Some[/STRIKE] Violent TV programs affect children's behavior i[STRIKE]n a wrong way[/STRIKE]. According to a survey, children who live in violent envrionments have more chances to commit crimes. "

"Watching TV occupies a large amount of children's time, which is supposed to be used to study."

See above amendments.

 

[SoothingDave]

Some violent programs affect children's behavior in a wrong way. ​

Do some violent programs affect children's behavior in a good way?

According to a survey, children who live in violent envrionments have more chance to commit crimes.

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Do you mean they have more opportunities to commit a crime or that they have a greater likelihood of committing a crime?

 

[heyuting]

Haha, thanks. Here I mean they have a greater likelihood of committing a crime.

Do some violent programs affect children's behavior in a good way?



Do you mean they have more opportunities to commit a crime or that they have a greater likelihood of committing a crime?

 

[heyuting]

Great, thanks.

See above amendments.

 

[shannico]

Haha, thanks.

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[heyuting]

I just found this sentence is funny. "Do some violent programs affect children's behavior in a good way?
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Haha, thanks.

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