wannabelean
Member
- Joined
- Jul 30, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Hindi
- Home Country
- India
- Current Location
- India
We would like to thank you for being our privileged customer and giving us an opportunity to serve you. We owe our success to you and assure to offer you our best of services. We once again thank you for your valued patronage.
The above is text suggested to us by one of the graphic designers who is designing a thank you note for us. I'm unable to tell what is wrong in it grammatically but feel its wrong and does not feel right. Clearly using thank you twice is one. What are the others?
Also what term should I use to tell the creator that thank you is repetitive? The creator took offense that I did not like the text and that it was insinuating.
Thanks!
The above is text suggested to us by one of the graphic designers who is designing a thank you note for us. I'm unable to tell what is wrong in it grammatically but feel its wrong and does not feel right. Clearly using thank you twice is one. What are the others?
Also what term should I use to tell the creator that thank you is repetitive? The creator took offense that I did not like the text and that it was insinuating.
Thanks!