Cause and effect of divorce

[Dermont]

Need help rewording this sentence:

"Althoughpeople trend to think carefully before they get marriage, the rates of divorcecontinuously rise nowadays."

 

[probus]

Need help rewording this sentence:

"Although people tend to think carefully before they get married, the rate of divorce continually rises nowadays."

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[billmcd]

Need help rewording this sentence:

"Although people [STRIKE] trend [/STRIKE] tend to think carefully before they get [STRIKE] marriage [/STRIKE] married, the rate[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] of divorce [STRIKE] continuously [/STRIKE] continues to rise." [STRIKE] nowadays [/STRIKE].

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