Jaggers
Junior Member
- Joined
- Mar 21, 2011
- Member Type
- Other
- Native Language
- English
- Home Country
- Ireland
- Current Location
- Ireland
This sentence just doesn't feel right! Is it missing a comma?
Mary was the manager in what was the town's best bar.
Would these be better?
(1) Mary was the manager in, what was the town's best bar.
(2) Mary was the manager in, what was, the town's best bar.
(3) Mary was the manager in (what was) the town's best bar.
Mary was the manager in what was the town's best bar.
Would these be better?
(1) Mary was the manager in, what was the town's best bar.
(2) Mary was the manager in, what was, the town's best bar.
(3) Mary was the manager in (what was) the town's best bar.