[General] Analyzing a sentence

[tcs68]

Is this sentence well written? "You always have something to say that simply melts me". I did not get a response and was wondering if there is something wrong with the way I said it. Your thoughts? Thank you!

 

[5jj]

Welcome to the forum, tcs.

The sentence is grammatically OK, but I don't know what you mean by melts.

 

[tcs68]

Thank you 5jj I The message was for someone I like and meant that he figuratively melts my heart.

 

[bhaisahab]

Thank you 5jj I The message was for someone I like and meant that he figuratively melts my heart.

It's fine. I once had a girlfriend who said that I melted her.

 

[5jj]

The mind boggles.

 

[emsr2d2]

It's fine. I once had a girlfriend who said that I melted her.

Meltable girlfriends normally aren't capable of speech!

 

[emsr2d2]

Is this sentence well written? "You always have something to say that simply melts me". I did not get a response and was wondering if there is something wrong with the way I said it. Your thoughts? Thank you!

I would say (as you did later on) "You always have something to say which simply melts my heart" or "... makes my heart melt".

 

[bhaisahab]

Meltable girlfriends normally aren't capable of speech!

After they have recovered from the melting....;-)

 

[emsr2d2]

After they have recovered from the melting....;-)

Ohhhh, I was thinking of the inflatable (and potentially melting) type of girlfriend! :shock:

 

[tcs68]

A meltable heart can be combined with a good head.;-)

 

[tcs68]

And a guy capable of melting a girl's heart is definitely capable of speech! :-D

 

[tcs68]

Meltable girlfriends normally aren't capable of speech!

A guy who can melt a girl's heart is definitely capable of speech! :-D