Jeff-Young
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- Joined
- Apr 2, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Help me Correct the Grammar!Thanks!
My company main product is Smart lighting system.Now we want to do a brochure to show to our clients.My english is not good,so i hope somebody help me correct the bellow message.Thank you very much!
Shenzhen Coworking company have been developed the series of Single-wire /neutral-wire remote touch switches、IR transmitter and Wifi router for many years to realize the wireless smart control system. Yichang Miaoqi Lighting company also have been developed and researched for many years,which fromed the fluorescent lamp and LED lights dim control series, Bus station network addressing control. And now we gathered all resources to make a new Smart lighting products、program design and some lighting lamps.
Our company development strategy target is Optical Network.
Our responsibility is Safety lighting,smart dimming,energy saving and modern using.And quality is our company life .We have five new directions(New company, new markets, new products, new team, new ideas.) to establish our brand awareness.,we will continue to opitimize the products quality,and design some new functions and prodcuts about the smart lighting system, to keep a competitive advantage of the main product at the same time.
Our target is that established a professional Smart lighting company through modern commercial mode in short time.Build a professional optical networking,to connect with the internet of things.
Thanks again!
Jeff
My company main product is Smart lighting system.Now we want to do a brochure to show to our clients.My english is not good,so i hope somebody help me correct the bellow message.Thank you very much!
Shenzhen Coworking company have been developed the series of Single-wire /neutral-wire remote touch switches、IR transmitter and Wifi router for many years to realize the wireless smart control system. Yichang Miaoqi Lighting company also have been developed and researched for many years,which fromed the fluorescent lamp and LED lights dim control series, Bus station network addressing control. And now we gathered all resources to make a new Smart lighting products、program design and some lighting lamps.
Our company development strategy target is Optical Network.
Our responsibility is Safety lighting,smart dimming,energy saving and modern using.And quality is our company life .We have five new directions(New company, new markets, new products, new team, new ideas.) to establish our brand awareness.,we will continue to opitimize the products quality,and design some new functions and prodcuts about the smart lighting system, to keep a competitive advantage of the main product at the same time.
Our target is that established a professional Smart lighting company through modern commercial mode in short time.Build a professional optical networking,to connect with the internet of things.
Thanks again!
Jeff