Lori84
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I need an opinion about this sentence. I'm trying to improve my creative writing and I'm not sure if this second part of sentence is good and does it makes sense. If you can help me or suggest how to write it better, I would much appreciate it.
'His passion and curiosity for life constantly encourage him to find new possibilities for creative development, which have since his arrival in America taken the course of documentary filmmaking.'
'His passion and curiosity for life constantly encourage him to find new possibilities for creative development, which have since his arrival in America taken the course of documentary filmmaking.'